[Honorbound RPG] A concept RPG based on character action and morality

[Ben]

Just as a quick update, I've been feverishly writing and I think that I'm getting a much better grip on how I want the game to come across and to feel through the game text. I've decided just to commit fully to a conversational, one-on-one, "I" and "you" tone. This has made it easier for me to write, allowing me to essentially phrase things how I would when describing the game to a friend or a new player in a dialogue.

Here's the link to the current work in progress document. I've written about 7k new words in the last few days, most of it color/setting/pre game stuff.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11t3SDyDrpgvCb8_iYFcfWTzR6hxINgxPA52CnsTRwLk/edit?usp=sharing

I'd like you all to take a look and let me know what you think. This is a super duper pre alpha, no edits, and I am continuously changing things. Thanks again.