Using everyone's posts as a goldmine of tweaks and new ideas, here is version 4. This is the most complete edit thus far with darn near everything in it except the Player reward cards. I still have to sort those out AND make art for them.
http://www.orbit-rpg.com/alls_quiet4.pdf
Here are the beginings of the GM's booklet. Feel free to post how this coupled with the rules pdf work in playtest.
http://www.orbit-rpg.com/alls_GMs.pdf
Fantastic! I currently play with a horde of Orbit fans. They'll seize a Diamond game like praying mantises.
Comments later; I'm kinda rushed.
Best,
Ron