Hi Ron!
While playing with Meme we had a doubt: on his first Go, "I" "must introduce the Lover"; the Lover must be described, also if maybe it's not obvious who (s)he is (like "A mob of people is in the jail"), or can be in the scene, but undescribed?
This was first Go in my game with Meme: "The battlefield is covered by corpses as far as the eye can see, warriors piled up in hills of corpses, lakes of blood, rivulets of bodily fluids.The battle created a place on its own, where all is composed by deads. Mobs of Demons prowl in the valley, plundering the corpses of their wealth and their organs".
The Lover was a Succubus, who were flying above the battlelfiled, but that doesn't appeared at all in the description; is that ok?
P.S.: I'm the same Mauro of INC, here (http://www.indie-rpgs.com/forum/index.php?topic=29802.msg276754#msg276754) I forgot to say this...
I'm shocked of how much my Go in English is awesome!
Damn! Your language is the coolest!
And thanks, Mauro, for the question! ^^
Read you soon
Meme