Hoping to find an Editor/Formatter for Dice Chucker

[oversoul01]

I think the subject pretty much says it all.  I wrote a short system(9 page pdf) calledDice Chucker and I am looking for someone who read over it, who could give me there opinion on any ways I might make it better.  I would prefer someone who has had experience in this department as I have littel to no editting skills.  The catch is I can not pay for these services, so it would have tobe out of the goodness of someone's heart.  I will of course give full credit to person for there help with the system.  And there is always the chance of more work down the road and possible compensation then. If you could help I would really like to hear from you.
Thanks
Bobby

[Juicetyger]

Sure, I'll help.  I have a degree in technical writing and some experience editing RPGs.  My e-mail is keeton@1km1kt.net