My first, free, new rpg online

[teckno72]

You can check out my new, free rpg at:
www.1km.1kt.net/rpg/picking-sides-the-role-playing-game

It is based on my novel (not free):

www.mynubook.com

Thanks for critique.  I know it has many rough spots, as it's my first attempt at anything like this.

[Seth M. Drebitko]

  The link above has an extra period in it.

http://www.1km1kt.net/rpg/picking-sides-the-role-playing-game

  Looks pretty simple and solid with a quick read over. Could use a little more fluff to give people an idea of there purpose and things like that. I would also like to see a little more description on examples of when, how, and why characters "level" in the system.

  Is there anything specifically that you were looking to review or discuss with the game?

Regards, Seth