playtesters, or at least some feedback, wanted

[flobby77]

We at Frughtlupes Creations have a new SF role-playing game called Center Space. It takes place on Earth after a 400 year alien invasion, the Earth having been geologicaly and geneticaly altered by those invaders.
Please check out the website!!! We`re willing to give away a few PDF`s for anyone interested in playtesting...

http://frughtlupes.yznet.com/centerspace/main.html

[Space Cowboy]

We at Frughtlupes Creations have a new SF role-playing game called Center Space. It takes place on Earth after a 400 year alien invasion, the Earth having been geologicaly and geneticaly altered by those invaders.
Please check out the website!!! We`re willing to give away a few PDF`s for anyone interested in playtesting...

http://frughtlupes.yznet.com/centerspace/main.html

Please don't be offended by this, but it would help make your product look more professional if you worked out all the spelling and grammar errors on your webpage.

Other than that, looks like a good start.

[flobby77]

No, thanks a lot. I can't believe those mistakes were overlooked... I'm glad they were noticed now rather thank later.

Thanks again.

[permacultureguerilla]

The story is beautiful. If you could give me a basic timeline. Eg: (This race does this on this year, etc) . . .

I would like to make a really dramatic-sounding story line to it and see if you like it.

[flobby77]

sounds good, I'll get to work on something and let you know when I'm done...

[Hardpoint]

Not point out flaws too much, but you also want to double check that all your links work. I found that the Races link from the Rules page is a dead link, as is the Contact link on the same page.

I've made this mistake a zillion times myself on my site, so I know how easy it is to make.

[flobby77]

To permacultureguerilla: I put up some outlines on the site, not for all the races yet... but check it out. I might have already emailed you and just forgot. Sorry if I'm telling you twice.
And thanks to all the people who are telling me all my mistakes! I'm sure there's more. (And no I'm not being sarcastic..)