Sex & Sorcery: Rereading it.

[Sydney Freedberg]

Arigato, Meguey-Sensei! (Yeah, I know Japanese isn't a gender-neutral language, so I probably screwed that up even worse than the first time.)

Credit where credit is due: Ron walked my befuddled brain through all of that in a long exchange of PMs after I posted my first draft of the "respect each other but also challenge each other" rules for apocalypse girl and he pointed out the flaws (in this thread, if you're really curious).