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Author Topic: [You Brought This On Yourself] The First Three Chapters  (Read 754 times)
JasonWalters
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« on: June 01, 2007, 12:36:55 PM »

Since several of you were kind enough to provide me with suggestions for my YBTOY Maniac "laundry lists," I though that I might provide a work-in- progress link to the first three chapters of the book, plus its art list. The layout is crude but should be serviceable for ashcan purposes. As you will be able to see at a glance, I have found Dogs In The Vinyard, My LIfe With Master, and The Pool to be particularly influential in what I am doing. Though I have yet to finnish the chapters on Combat, Playing The Game, and Setting, few of you will have any trouble seeing the direction which I'm headed in.

As always, your thoughts -- especially on the "feel" of what I am working on -- would be greatly appreciated. Please link at:   

http://us.f13.yahoofs.com/bc/4660785e_17206/bc/Ashcan/Slashcan+123.pdf?bfw8HYGBzDxFp3yG
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Jason Morningstar
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« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2007, 08:56:41 AM »

That link isn't working.
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JasonWalters
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« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2007, 08:36:01 PM »

That's odd. It works when I click it. Could you try cutting and pasting (http://us.f13.yahoofs.com/bc/4660785e_17206/bc/Ashcan/Slashcan+123.pdf?bfhjkYGBJwXWp3yG)? I would in particular like your thoughts on what I've been doing.

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