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The Above is the link to the setting I'm going to be putting the finishing touches on and running. Character generation is next Monday and the game is next Thursday.

Out of Game Story

Forgive me if this bores the heck outta ya. But this is how this game came to be. I'll be doign more crunchy Sorcerer system stuff in my next post.

I've met a new group that I dig and we play 7th Sea every Thursday. But the next two Thursdays are 7th Sea-less due to scheduling conflicts and so I took that opportunity to offer to run a one-shot.

Ithaca's a small gaming town and so the local Ars Magica GM caught wind of thinsg and after he and I talked gaming at a party last week, he's in the mix too. This is cool, I've been meaning to make a connection with him and this is the perfect opportunity to complete my stranglehold over every gaming connection in the ENTIRE TOWN! *insert maniacal cackling*

I sent them an e-mail with 3 possiblities, all Sorcerer. Between Heavenly Kung-fu, Birthright Sorcerer and Demons from the Hell-side of Town, they chose the latter. I didn't mention that this was theone that interested me the least but that's cool. Now I HAVE To develop it and its growing on me.

Here's what I want to prep.

1. Descriptors
2. Relationships Map
2a. might just take one from Sorcerer's Soul and save myself some hassle
3. One-Sheet with art, flavor text and the summoning chart
4. Bangs (to be written post character generation)
5. Play!

Next: Descriptors!

Descriptors

While writing and running The Dictionary of Mu's Bed the importance of Descriptors has become really evident. In both games, due to interesting descriptors, a character went from a vague idea to a kick-ass high-gear concept due to a descriptor that just brought it all together for a player. They can really tie the characters to the setting.

Like in the Big Lebowski, "That carpet really tied the room together, Dude." Descriptors are the carpet.

I want this setting to be gritty. I'm looking over my inspirational list and thinking about it, adding to the list as I go.

Influences: Miller's Crossing, The Soprano's, The Godfather, The Road to Perdition (comic book, haven't seen movie) and Streets of Fire, Heat, Sin City, The Usual Suspects

Referrencing my holy text for this kind of work, the Art Deco Melodrama Thread, I know I want a world with rich flavor but history isn't so important.

I want people just on the edge of two worlds, the legit city and the Hell-side of town. The descriptors should say that.

Flavor? Okay, flavor we can do.

Stamina Descriptors

Dishonorable Discharge- "In the Army? See any action?"

Just Outta the Joint - "9th Circle Federal as tough as they say?"

Rough Drinker, Rough Life - "You can't treat his body like this forever, it can't hold up."

Police Academy Trained - "So, you's just a part of that gang from City Hall with the blue uniforms and the badge."

Foxy Dame - "You got a fire extinguisher to go with that dress?"

I'm not thrilled with the list, I'm afraid they are too much like covers. For now I'll leave 'em and move on to others.

Will Descriptors

Mad Dog - "That guy's crazy, don't mess with him. He won't beatcha. He'll burn down your house and murder your dog. The other dogs and wolves in town, they just seem drawn to him, like the more he foams at the mouth, the more cred he's got."
Big Shot Ivy Leaguer - "Don't get haughty taughty on me with yer big-shot college degree. It don't do you no good at that bar you hang around at."

Courting Death - "Ever since X happened, he's just been looking for a reason to get himself perished."

Too Dumb to Lie Down - "Some people are too dumb to know when to lie down and take a good beating. Sometimes putting conflict to rest is the rightest thing a fella can do. Fer heaven's sake, let this one go."

John Q. Citizen - "He tries so hard to be an upright, upstanding tax-payer that ya know something's up. He's hiding something. Still, he's squeaky clean on paper."

I'm fairly happy with the Will Descriptors.

Lore Descriptors

Gladiator Academy - "That's a fuckin' tough place to spend your formative years. He got his education in the yard, meditated in a dank solitary cell and took beatings for extra credit."

Family Business - "You can't be brought up where he was brought up and not know what he knows. He can call a hit like you or I could call a tailor. Its in the blood. You can't fight that."

Naive Enabler - "He don't know much about the Hell-side of things. He just looks after the person he loves who went over, never admitting how deep he's into it."

Tarnished Badge - "Cops know what happens on the Hell-side and he learned about about the life from the other side of a badge. The scumbags he can call forth outta the gutter with a phone call or a well-placed word are the same bastards he cuffed and beat just yesterday."

Mastermind - "I dont' know him and don't know nothin' you're talkin' about and won't say no more until I see my lawyer. I talk to you here, sure I get immunity but my life expency shrinks to nothing out on the street. There's a legion of killers, junkies and whores who would jump over their dying grandma to do his bidding."

The Lore desciptors seem to have brought it all together for me. I don't like to write Covers if I don't have to. Some players will feel like they HAVE to choose one and I'd rather they found their own niche.

I'm going to sleep on these and see how they look in the morning and if any of you have any feedback or comments that'll be swell.

Thanks for reading.

Hi, Judd --

I like the descriptors, and I think they're evocative of the setting. I agree with you that it's hard to pick apart whether some of the Stamina Descriptors could be covers as well. But some cross-over may very well be fine.

For instance, I could see "Just Out of the Joint" as a Cover, including things like handling being unemployed and knowing how to placate your parole officer. But that seems to describe different things from "Just out of the Joint" as a Stamina descriptor.

I think the important thing is that all the descriptors put an image in your head, and they do that well.

Here's a stab at rewriting the stamina descriptors to be more stamina evocative, rather than cover like. Hope they're useful and that they don't loose too much of the flavor.

Army (or other service) P.T. replaces Dishonorable Discharge
Prison Weights Regimen replaces Just Outta the Joint
Rough Drinker, Rough Life seems fine as a Stamina descriptor.
Obstacle Course Monkey replaces Police Academy Trained
Anorexic replaces Foxy Dame

--Scott Martin

Hmm, I'd use "Pretty Boy/Pretty Girl" to replace Foxy Dame. Physical beauty is important.

I agree with the importance of separating out Cover and descriptors -- that way you can have Pretty Boy cops and so on.

How about something like "Musclebound" for all the ex-prize fighters and professional wrestlers out there?

I'd also vote for "Fat" or "Muscles under the fat" as a descriptor, thinking of "The Big Lebowski."

And maybe one for the fast, skinny guys. Something like "Snake-like" or "Quick as a Weasel".

My other thought: this might be a good game to use dual Cover stats for, one for the legit job and one for the underworld side. Alternatively, you could have Cover be the legit job or role, and Lore describe one's place in the underworld. So you could have "Lawyer 4" as your Cover and "Bagman 2" as your Lore score.

I would also suggest "Connected Guy" instead of "Family Business", as a reader of too many Mob books over the years.

Stamina Descriptors (additional)

Sweet Science - "Kid's got hands like hammers. If the Hell-side of town hadn't gotten its hook in him, he might've been a contender."

Will Descriptor (Additional)

Workin’ Stiff – “He does every-day errands for very bad people. But it pays the rent.”

Wrote up a Relationship Map that is loosely based on Adam and Eve. I think the underworld is going to have alot of Old Testament references and names.

Tonight we'll make up characters. Rob, from my Dictionary of Mu game that I ran last night with he and Paula will be there, which is nice. Having one player who understands the system and will aid in the explanation of Kickers will help quite a bit.

Next: Player Characters and the Kickers who love them

Hiya,

I do think that keeping Cover, Will, and Stamina descriptors independent of one another is a very good idea.

Cover - think of this as a set of signs and behaviors that other people would use to identify the person as X.

Will - think of this as a preferred, specific, and uncompromising way that the person expresses himself or herself to influence others. He or she can do any number of things to influence others, but this is the way that has worked best in the past.

Stamina - think of this as just like Will, except exerting influence over physical motion and impact rather than over others' behavior.

Can they overlap? Sure. But not necessarily. "Martial artist" as a Stamina descriptor might have nothing to do with the signs, behaviors, and other things that tip people off to "high-paid advertising exec" as the character's Cover descriptor. Whereas "scrapper" for a Stamina descriptor and "martial arts instructor" as a Cover indicates a very different character.

As a related issue, sometimes I want to remind people that the Stamina and Will descriptors in Sorcerer are both physical and mental, or rather, that the game does not distinguish between body and mind in the same way that most RPGs do. If you roll all the character's Stamina dice, he is putting everything he has into that action, including the force of his intention. If you roll all of hisWill dice, he is using his physical presence to its utmost as well as tone of voice or whatever.

Anyway, back to the main topic of this post, which concerns Cover. Cover descriptors should be specific and also extremely culture-embedded: "soccer mom," "CEO of top radio station," "tenured philosophy professor," "FBI trainee." This is very different from the Will and Stamina descriptors, which should be fairly generalized - they express how the character deals with things, across a wide range of situations.

I'm making a big deal out of this, Judd, because it's a major concern for me in the current Mu MS as well.

Best,
Ron

So, are my Descriptors for this game broken badly and in need of re-tooling?

Any specific comments you can make would be appreciated.

Thanks.

Let's see ...

As you knew from the beginning, the problem with most of your Stamina Descriptors is that, in your effort to invoke Color, you're bringing in too much Cover and potentially too much Kicker. I think that Uncle Sam's Man replaces Dishonorable Discharge all right; that Just Outta the Joint is best as a Lore descriptor; Police Academy Trained is definitely a Cover. "Sweet science" and "Working stiff" seem much better as Cover descriptors. For one thing, as Covers, they each imply a whole host of NPCs and places that would go into the diagram on the back.
Rough Drinker Rough Life is just fine, and I like Foxy Dame. The suggested "Muscles under the Fat" and "Nervous weasel" seem about right to me.

So it seems to me that a few more Stamina descriptors are called for. See my guidelines above: stuff like "Granite Jaw" or "Whip-thin" seem along those lines. I also suggest being open to player suggestions, as long as everyone is aware that you-all are adding to a customized list in doing so, rather than playing any kind of "invent your own descriptor" game.

Will Descriptors: Mad Dog, Big Shot Ivy Leaguer, Courting Death (I'd rename this Walking Dead Man), Too Dumb to Lie Down, John Q. Citizen are all beautiful. I suggest Devil May Care and Do-Gooder as well.

Lore Descriptors: Family Business, Naive Enabler, Tarnished Badge (note that this Lore descriptor doesn't imply the character is currently a cop), Mastermind - all awesome. I suggest replacing Gladiator Academy with Just Outta the Joint. Another one for this category might be Defrocked Scholar.

Damn it. Merely by composing this post, I just hit upon a character concept I wanna play now.

Best,
Ron

Ron Edwards wrote: Damn it. Merely by composing this post, I just hit upon a character concept I wanna play now.

Only 1 of 3 gamers showed up to the character generation session due to complications and miscommunication.

Matt, the local Ars Magica ST, and I sat down and made up his character. He had e-mailed me that his concept was a midling mob boss' family drive whose Demon is the boss' mistress.

Joe Kelly

Telltale - Driver's cap

Stamina - 4 Rough drinks, Rough life
Will - 4 Too Dumb to Lie Down
Lore - Workin' Stiff

Cover - 4 Mob wheelman
Price - -1 Cynical

Kicker - Driving back from a late night party with the boss' oldest son and someone drives by the car while shooting and the son is shot dead in the back seat.

Demon

Gangster Moll - As yet unnamed

Need - A compassionate ear
Desire - Power

Abilities

Boost - Stamina
Can bestow the Cover - Lovestruck Tough Guy
Boost - Lore

We decided that Joe would fight better when defending her and would know the underworld better when guided by her. She just wants someone to really listen to her but Joe's in love with her and has trouble listening at all much of the time.

Its a rough start but its a start.

Miriam is who I walk to the 7th Sea games with and I knew from our talks on those walks that her mother was a psychiatrist. When she said she wanted to play a career woman who was dating a drug dealer, roughly paralleling a real relationship she had. Knowing she would get right into it I dropped the idea of her PC being a shrink, rather than her original idea, a copy editor. We tweaked it so that she is some kind of mad cross between Dr. Melfi from the Soprano's and Keyser Soje from The Usual Suspects. Nice.

Telltale - Track marks

Stamina - 2 Rough Drinker, Rough Life
Will - 3 Big Shot Ivy Leaguer
Lore - 5 Mastermind

Cover - 3 Shrink
Price - -1 Cynical

Kicker - She comes home from a rough day at the office to find Sal, her drug dealer boyfriend (and Demon) calmly waiting for her with a gun in his lap. "My warehouse with the shit in it was robbed last night. Only you and a few others know that place exists. Who did it?"

Demon

Drug Dealer Boyfriend - Sal

Need - Someone to be an addict with him
Desire - Competition

Abilities

Boost - Will
Boost - Lore
Can bestow the Cover - Dirty Fighter
Perception - Weaknesses
Cloak


I have yet to meet with the third gamer, which is a pain in my ass. I'll meet with him before the game tomorrow but coming up with Bangs with only two of the three Kickers in front of me is annoying.

Shit happens.

The good side is that the third gamer is Robert, now a Sorcerer veteran from my Intrigue in Mu's Bed game, will know how to craft a P.C. The other two gamers have cottoned on to this game with remarkable speed, probably a combination of me having more of a grip on the system and them being smart brother and sister geeks.

I have a relationship map which I might or might not use fully. I have some Tom Waits albums, Bruce Springsteen's creepy-ass Nebraska album and a few other CD's picked out for the 5 CD carousel at the apartment we'll game at.

Tomorrow evening the game's on.

Demons in this game's powers are funky to pull off. I'd like to fiddle with them more, think of rationales for each and every power and how they'd work.

Sounds good so far... two comments.

First, is Miriam's character a junkie? If so, were you planning to represent that in any way in her character sheet?

Second, the Demons seem pretty cool to me. Interesting how both of them are significant others, instead of the bodyguards and autistic younger brothers that would have ocurred to me.

Third, Sal's Need just blows me away. That's a wonderfully twisted setup right there.

Please keep the updates coming, this is nifty stuff. My Nobilis PBEM just met its final reward, so I'm jonesing for a new game to run.

DannyK wrote: Sounds good so far... two comments.

First, is Miriam's character a junkie? If so, were you planning to represent that in any way in her character sheet?

DannK wrote: Second, the Demons seem pretty cool to me. Interesting how both of them are significant others, instead of the bodyguards and autistic younger brothers that would have ocurred to me.

Third, Sal's Need just blows me away. That's a wonderfully twisted setup right there.

Please keep the updates coming, this is nifty stuff. My Nobilis PBEM just met its final reward, so I'm jonesing for a new game to run.

About the autistic younger brother:
I was just thinking of Rain Man, with Dustin Hoffman as the Sorcerer, putting up with his brother and taking advantage of his leet idiot-savant skillz.

I'm always up for talking 'bout Nobilis, anytime.

I don't have many PC and Demon names so for the purposes of writing up these Bangs they are the Shrink, the Dealer, the Driver and the Moll.


* The Shrink sees someone dealing crank and she knows it is her Dealer's stuff...but his stuff was busted by the cops, right?

* The Driver is called by his Boss who wants to know where his son is, might ask to be driven around, not realizing the Driver was the last one to take him out.

* The Shrink is contacted by the local Mob Boss' son who is grief-stricken about the death of his brother. Will it come out that he had him killed?

* The Driver is cornered by the Boss-Man's wife who wants to know where he was on such and such a date and time, when he was with his mistress. The wife knows and wants the affair put to an end.

* The Driver is given the number of the Shrink who is known to be people who knows people and might be able to help him suss out the death of the Boss-Man's murder.

* Those who whacked the Boss-Man's Son come looking for the Driver to finish it off when he get's some clues as to who did it and why.

* The police are after the Driver, who was left alive on purpose, so the hit could be pinned on him. They are waiting at his apartment and a few of his known hang-outs the bartender will mention a plainclothes cop was just around to see him.



My heads full of cotton this morning but that's a start.

* The Dealer O.D.'s at a crucial moment.

* The Dealer and the Moll are having a conversation in a dark corner while the Shrink and the Driver discuss the situation at hand. Someone sees the Dealer has handed the Moll something...

* Word on the stree is that the Boss has Summoned Vitor "Vicious" to track down his son's killers. Vitor just got out of the joint and is a known sociopath hardcase.

(Vitor's Need, to kill other Demons and watch them die.)

I made up a character with Robert minutes before the game was set to begin. This was rough on the pacing of the game. The session worked but it makes a notable difference when I don't have a few days at least to mull over someone's character sheet and Kicker, thinking about where to go with it all.

Robert pitched a stockbroker who clawed his way out of the Hell-side of town and after his dad committed suicide his Ma, his Demon, came to live with him. His Ma is a tough old, cursing, alchoholic bitch who always manages to find the roughest and nastiest thing to say to someone and break them down.

Telltale - Too immaculate, his suit never seems to get dirty and yet he is always compulsively brushing it off.

Stamina - 2 whip thin
Will - 3 Big Shot Ivy Leaguer
Lore - 5 Mastermind

Cover - 3 Stockbroker
Price - -1 Emotionally Disenfranchised (-1 to Will checks)

Kicker - He is on his way to meet a new client whose portfolio isn't made up of legally earned money.

Demon

Alchoholic Ma

Need - To be Pampered
Desire - Sensual Gratification

The Game

For brevity the characters and their Demons will be known as The Broker, Ma, The Shrink, the Dealer, the Driver and the Moll.

Rob's late entry made it rough and I jotted down a few Bangs and none of them seemed to move him. I wasn't to hm playing such a dour character and silently grew frustrated with his stockbroker.

I started the game with the Bindings, always nice preludes. In this game, where the Demons are actual people, the Bindings really set the tone for the entire game.

There were several Summonings and Contacts but I didn't feel, that with two Masterminds in the group, that enough was done or that the lines of Humanity were fussed with enough.

The Driver had all of the action sequences with tons of violence, really seeing how fast and furious the action turns bloody and ugly in this game. Matt used thsi terrain to his advantage and did some neat stuff. Hitting the breaks to get a goon with a garrotte off of him and driving a hitman over a fourth story railing to his broken doom.

My Bangs weren't precisely where I wanted them, as it came out during play that Kay, a local boss' son, was the one who killed his brother, Little Absolom, the man the Driver was driving around in his Kicker.

After three and a half hours of round-robin play I got everyone into a jail cell together, in a very Usual Suspects moment and they realized that Kay was behind the hit, the Boss' wife was the Sorcerer, the person behind the Demons and that they had to show that Kay was behind all of it somehow.

The game ended with a calculated scheme that amounted to a great Banishment Ritual, forcing Kay to lose his temper while his dad sat in the next room and heard him bragging aboutthe money he made off of his brother's hit.

It was good stuff.

Humanity was lost due to Summonings, when Joe Kelly tried to Summong Shamus O'Malley but instead got McLaren, his little dim brother (failed Summoning roll) and when Joe tortured one of the hitmen who tried to kill him.

Contacts and Summonings lost some humanity too. Cynical's a nasty price.

The Shrink gained Humanity when she braved a cop's sting to give bail money to one of her clients whose husband was caught in her Demon's warehouse being busted.

Overall Thoughts

Making all of the characters together in advance makes a big difference. It didn't kill the game but it dented it a bit.

The action sequences were exciting, fast and brutal. A PC was shot, noses were bitten and it all ended with a big stand-off with many guns pointing all over the place.

A good time was had by all and the game ended on a resoundingly positive note. Everyone was interested in playing more Sorcerer, seeing what else the game could do.

Next time I play this game I will push for a character creation session, I'll ease the players into the idea of going to 0 Humanity as a fine outcome filled with as much drama and awesomeness as any other.

Hmm, last one was a weak character with a weak Demon. (Although that's a great idea, mother-as-demon. Makes me think of that old Cagney flick.)

Sounds like a good game, though. Did any Kickers get resolved?

All of the Kickers get resolved in a neat endgame final scene. All of their Kickers were linked to Kay's move on his brother's territory. It all worked out rather neatly, especially after everyone talked through the bars of their prison while the bail was being set.

That was when they put all of the pieces together and made their final plans.