Topic: [Levity]: New free system, need a review for translation
Started by: rgrassi
Started on: 7/14/2004
Board: Indie Game Design
On 7/14/2004 at 8:12pm, rgrassi wrote:
[Levity]: New free system, need a review for translation
Hi all. I'm Roberto from Italy.
I've just published an italian PDF version of my free rpg system specifically built for kids, new to Gdr and Gdr casual players.
http://www.robertograssi.net/meyroan/rpg/levity.zip
It emphasizes on narration and simple rules with some 'new' and interesting "narration" modes to allow the master to conduct an interesting session.
I'd like to translate it in english and let it know to you all.
I'll do this task but i realy need one-two of you to revise it in order to find mistakes, typos and so on...
Is there someone interested?
TIA,
Rob
On 7/15/2004 at 10:57pm, Kesher wrote:
RE: [Levity]: New free system, need a review for translation
Howdy, Roberto.
I downloaded the pdf, and though I speak no Italian, my English is good enough to pull out some Latinate meaning from it.
It looks interesting, & with a five-and-a-half month old son, I've been thinking alot lately about gaming for kids.
I'd love to help you edit your translation; you can send the manuscript to: akesher@mn.rr.com
The more specifics you can give me about what kind of feedback you want, the better, of course!
On 7/16/2004 at 6:26am, rgrassi wrote:
RE: [Levity]: New free system, need a review for translation
The more specifics you can give me about what kind of feedback you want, the better, of course!
Ok, thank you very much.
When i'll finish my translation (plan before 9 of August) i'll let you know. :)
Cheers,
Rob