Jared's been so kind as to let me post a request on his forum, so... here goes:
I've written a game that I need to have a few more eyes on. It's already been passed to some potential play-testers, but I need the loving care that only the Forgers can give. Hence, please beat this horse until it don't move no mo'.

http://www.indie-rpgs.com/hosted/sdemory/monmouri.doc

Thanks in advance,
Sean Demory