Tony: you ask for corrections to Capes on your website, so I'm posting one: 'pharaoh' isn't spelled "pharoah", which you do in your examples at least twice. Search and replace, and learn ancient egyptian.

Otherwise: I'm reading the game and getting to know it. I don't understand it at all, but luckily I have Ben Lehman here, and he seems to know how it's supposed to work. I like the way it's written, but it's definitely optimized for hand-book use rather than learning from the book.