Hi all,

I have shown some people my RPG and I have ran some playtests.  I need to see if the game stands up by itself or if the results were solely achieved through my personal intervention.  I have reposted the rules on my website and I need some people interested in playtesting short sessions with them. 

The rules are 40 pages long (I want to make a "short and sweet" rpg.)  I need some people who are interested in "god games."  I plan on making a game where the gods have to actually care about the mortals. 

I tried to make the rules pretty flexible and the setting universal.  However, I need to know if I succeeded in being "short and sweet" or I am leaving too much on the GM (I call them overseers in my game.)

The copy is pretty complete.  I have not included any donated art and I do need to proofread (if all the suggestions went well.)

Thanks,

Sean

Hi all,

I should have noted that I am also willing to exchange "armchair" reviews.  I have gotten some feedback back but it's tempered by the fact I known them.  I just have the feeling they were holding back and hence, the need for unbiased feedback.

Please close this thread.  If you are interested in playtesting, please PM me and I will email you a copy of the rules.

Sean