Hi everyone.

I have just recently finished up with a second draft of an RPG, and I'm hoping to get some feedback from other game designers, and some playtesting from people who I don't already know well.

Hell Tempered is a Naritivist game about characters who have escaped from hell. It is designed to be played in short campaigns (3-5 sessions) with clear goals for the characters. The tone of the game is supposed to be something like a troma movie.

I have put a full version of the game (to date) on Writely, and it can be viewed here:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=ah4dxsjnvdcc_0fn5bgw

I thought this might be usefull so that I could add anyone who is interested in playtesting as a collaborator, and they could leave notes about any rules that they found confusing or problematic.

I'm looking forward to hearing some comments and feedback, and it would be super great if anyone would like to try playing a session or two of this game in progress and letting me know how it goes.