Hi guys, I’m new to this forum so I will introduce myself, my name is Ciro and I am from Venezuela so sorry if my english get too wrong. I’m developing a game. But I have a problem writing the setting. It’s a fantasy game but not an adventurous one. the mood and themes are more like Mage Revised than D&D. Is a game in a fantastic interpretation of Greece with philosophers being like Jedis. Anyway y have some problems writing the setting. I don’t know where to start. Can you tell me you own experience on this? Or give me some suggestions?

Thanks
Ciro

Hi, and welcome to the Forge

The way I normally create setting is through actually playing in the setting. This is not the most efficient way to of doing it, but it is a good way to get your imagination going.

What I do is trying to come up with a campaign which will be relevant for the type of setting I am going for, and then just create the elements of the setting which are strictly necessary for the campaign to start. Then, during the campaign, I will flesh out more and more of the setting as needed for the story to move forward.

What I normally start with is some general concepts of the setting: The feeling I want to have, the technological level, how magic works (if it exists), the races and cultures which are important for the campaign, and the conflicts I want to work with in the game (I many cases this will be conflicts between cultures and races). I will always draw a map - which give a very good visual understanding of the world - but only put down the cities (and other places) which are necessary for the campaign. From this foundation it is then possible to slowly expand the setting as the game progress.

In this way you will write the setting from the inside, and you will properly get a lot of help from the players. I find that this will give a much more coherent setting, without too much extraneous materiel. But as I said, this is a slow way of doing it, you have to run a good number of campaign in the setting before it is complete.

- Anders

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Hi guys, I’m new to this forum so I will introduce myself, my name is Ciro and I am from Venezuela so sorry if my english get too wrong. I’m developing a game. But I have a problem writing the setting. It’s a fantasy game but not an adventurous one. the mood and themes are more like Mage Revised than D&D. Is a game in a fantastic interpretation of Greece with philosophers being like Jedis. Anyway y have some problems writing the setting. I don’t know where to start. Can you tell me you own experience on this? Or give me some suggestions?

Welcome to the Forge! 

One thing that works, as Anders mentioned, is to play your setting using an existing system for a while.  For yours, The Shadow of Yesterday seems like it would be a great fit.  As you play, you may find things that don't work or that you'd like to change.  These points of departure are the areas where your own game can emerge. 

Hi and thanks to all for your comments and suggestions, I have been working on this setting for a time but I’m beginning to write just now. I will give you some of the intro to let you review it. Please be honest in your comments and any thoughts and ideas are welcome.

LOGOS

“The Greek world, the land of the thinkers and the wise, is entering the age of Logos what means that the world of the ideas and the world of the matter are merging, or rather the material world this being diluted by the world of forms. Why? Everything began with Socrates, an individual who glimpse that there was a perfect principle and eternal that gave sense to the rest of the universe and says he had seen it with his own eyes, after that he was condemned to death by the city of Athens for neglecting the gods. And Plato after was but far and create the Science of the Forms that allowed to anyone of its disciples who studied it, to perceive this world of the forms and interact with. Time later Plato vanishes without leaving sign. And at the same time and almost consequently the world of the ideas begins to pronounce itself of brutal way. Thus they appear the calls fugues between worlds where the reality disintegrate and it is confused. In these old times and old and new schools of thought spread all Greece with their influence and its miraculous knowledge to handle the cosmos.”

I’m having yet some problems where to start writing the setting so if any of you can give me some advise, I think the setting is well designed, I just don’t know where to start writing it or what info is important no write or ignore.

Thanks for everything,
Ciro

It is an interesting concept you have there, but, as rycanada put it in his blog, what you have there is background, so what you need to focus on is some more foreground. Background is fine to give an overview, and it is also good to justify why things are like they are now in the setting. But what is really important are the elements of the setting which are relevant for the actual game (the foreground). So this is a good place to start writing your setting, by focusing on that which are close to the characters during the game.

Here are two questions to get you going:

If you think about a typical group of player characters in this setting, what type of character would they most likely be? Farmers? Philosophers? Politicians?

What problems would they most likely face? What conflicts would these people engage in during the game?

- Anders

The main characters are the philosophers there are various faction of them. The schools of thought or just the schools as everybody know them. The splats are the next:

-The Platonics: Sophisticated Tracendentalist, who reject the empirical experience to embrace the world of ideas and seek perfection.

-The Aristotelians: Exceptional Scientifics, who theorize about the world of forms being another kind of objective reality that can be calculated, manipulated and conquered.

-The Stoics: Devoted Rationalists, who believe in Logos as a conscious being, and seek logical patterns in events to find out the will of the cosmos.

-The Epicureans: Bohemian Aesthetician, who shun the perfect logic of the universe and seek beauty and pleasure as ultimate goal.

-The Pythagoric: Mystic Mathematicians, who believe in the abstract meaning of the numbers and the gods. They seek mathematical occult and usually are secretly behind any religious issue in Greece.

-The Cynics: Sardonic nihilist, who wander the cities mocking on the eternal truths of the cosmos.

the standard game will be around solving metaphysical mysteries and conflict between the schools. But I think there are lots of play styles for this game, you can play greek wars or remake the miths.

here is a bit of the inside art, I’m associated with and artist who is making the art for this game

Zero Zeed

this is a sample Pytagoric.

edited to change image to a link - RE

Ciro, I want to encourage you in the development of your game! The background, as the others have already said, sounds wonderful. It's certainly right up my alley (but that may be because I was a philosophy major back in university and personally maintain a certain epistemological affinity with Platonism).

One thing I'm confused about, however: how, exactly, will the player characters effect change in the world? You mentioned fighting in wars (both intellectual and physical) and re-creating myths. How would the PCs do this: by influencing other people or by taking up arms themselves?

Answering that question should lead to another: what kind of "philosophers" are the PCs? Are they somehow superhuman? (That's the feeling I'm getting.) Or are the merely human, although with exceptional intellect and force of personality?

Once you settle what it is, precisely, that the characters will be doing in the game, you'll have a much easier time of fleshing out the setting.

Something else you might want to decide: is the game designed so as to emphasize solidarity and cooperation among the player characters, or will they be competing against one another? Obviously, some of both might happen; but what is it that you want the characters to do most of the time?

First of all thanks for your comment Anders. The philosophers in Logos have a supernatural understanding of the cosmos, what gives them some kind of supernatural powers (the Jedis from Star wars are a good example of the power level but the philosophers can learn to manipulate almost every thing of the cosmos: minds, time, the world of forms or entropy). But power doesn’t come for free. The workings of the universe are too complex for a human mind to understand so the philosophers become inhuman and obsessed in the developing of their sciences. That’s one of the basic themes of Logos.

the game is designed to have the PCs fighting each others if they get different faction philosophers, but some times they work “together” to solve some problems or ally to get major benefits from a given situation. If the PCs are from the same School sure they will be allies, so there are various ways of playing.

The schools have (openly or secretly) an enormous influence in the world politics and in Greece politics sooner or later means war. So in war times the schools can chose factions and surely they can determine the fate of a war.

Thanks to rycanada for link me his blog if found it very interesting and helpful. Thanks everyone for your comments and suggestions

You see, starting by describing who the characters are, what they do and what role they have in society, give a very good understanding of what to do with the setting, so that is what I will recommend starting with; and then you can expand it from there. You can begin to look at what type of NPC the characters typically will interact with and what roles they have in the society. How does the society look at the characters, and what is the political situation surrounds the characters. And so on...

For every new element you add you should ask yourself how does this relate to the characters and what they should do in the game, and how relevant is this for the type of stories you want to tell in this setting. If there is no strong tie there, you should consider not adding it.

Where exactly to set the limit of what to have and what not to have in the setting, is of course a personal opinion. I normally prefer not to have too much setting material. I like it when there is lot of room for me to expand on the setting to make it fit the actual game I am running. I don't want to much history about the world, maybe some resent background for why people behave like they do. And I do not want to many concrete things, like, for instance, full descriptions of all cities. I prefer just a general description of what a typical city look like, so I can use that to put together my own stuff. But this, as I said, is just my personal opinion.

- Anders

Hi Ciro,

Here's a little idea that might help as well.

Setting is a big term. It refers to a lot of things, but the main point is that setting is much larger than the characters in it. It includes the history before the time of play, for example, and even things that the characters will never see.

I like to think, instead, in terms of Situation. That's a much more specific part of Setting - in fact, it's the part that the real people pay attention to, when playing. It's the particular location and time within the setting in which the events of play occur.

A lot of people fall into a trap when they design a role-playing game. They add to the Setting, and then they add more, and then they add more. But they never quite manage to arrive at any Situations, or to show how a group of real people might construct a Situation within that Setting. Not even "example scenarios" do a good job for that purpose.

What I suggest is to imagine exactly the right Situation that you'd like to use in the very first session that you actually play this game. What's going on in that particular location and time? What might the player-characters actually see, and what might they do?

If you can imagine even two or three of these, and if you manage to play some of them for real, you will find that the Setting has grown, organically, in your mind. I think you will also find that many things that you might have put into your Setting turn out to be unnecessary or comparatively uninteresting, and so you have saved yourself and your game a lot of effort for something it does not need. And finally, you will also find through actual play what the other people really need to know in order to enjoy the Situation fully - and that, right there, is what you need to present in your game text as Setting.

Best, Ron