I'm probably a) taking this too seriously and b) running out of time, but I would really like this game to work. I had a cat die recently and this is like my homage to him or something... anyway, this is where I'm at so far. I'm going to try to put it up on Sunday or Monday if its still on. Any thoughts.

Here's the game:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10738325/catgamesofar.pdf

Here a link to the thread with the challenge:
http://story-games.com/forums/comments.php?DiscussionID=12892&page=1#Item_33