I had a chance to play Mars Colony tonight. I took pretty careful notes, and here is a report of how it went, followed by some thoughts about the game and the experience. Sorry about the length. Players were M = Governor (Bloomfield) and IM = Kelly Perkins aka KP.

Stage 1: Fear cards
We each generated three fear cards, and randomly revealed two:
1. The Republicans anger me when they polarize political discourse (M; revealed at start, didn't come into play)
2. The government only works for corporate interests (IM; revealed at start, lots of play)
3. The powerful churches undermine the separation of church and state, legislating morality (M; revealed later, but never came into play)
4. The fiat money system (no gold standard) only makes the banks and corporations rich and erodes everyone's savings (IM; revealed later, barely came into play)
5. The officials can always make promises and plans without having to execute because terms are so short (IM)
6. Rendition and torture are an example of government denying freedom (M)

Stage 2. Political Parties
Free Mars Party (Red, minority) stands for independence, secession of MC from Earth
Mars Party (Blue, dominant) like Democrats - "Mars needs more government"
Liberty Party (Yellow, fringe) like libertarians: free enterprise, local infrastructure ownership

Stage 3. Politicians - I'll discuss these as they came up in play. We also made up additional NPC that weren't on the sheet, like Joe Riddle (KP advisor), or Josephine Fayes (a frenemy of the movement).

Stage 4-6
IM played KP. KP was affiliated with the dominant Mars Party, but hinted at a secret secessionist agenda. IM rolled for the Sympathy and came up with Parent/Outcast: Jonas Perkins, KP's father, had to relocated to Mars years ago, when his highly controversial experiments with terraforming technology were scene as threatening. MC started not quite as a penal colony but a place that undesirable elements were encouraged to move to rather than face repercussions on Earth. Jonas continues his experiments in an R&D lab in a remote mining outpost on Mars; has lost contact with with his son.

Stage 7: Health Markers
1. Labor: working conditions on MC are unsafe, workers are overworked and underpayed, struggle to make ends meet. There is labor unrest. These problems originated in the early days of MC, when many workers were "convinced" to relocate to Mars.
2. Radiation: As children are born on Mars, many are suffering from birth defects which many believe are caused by harmful space radiation; the issue is hushed up, but it exacerbates the plight of the workers.
3. Corruption: politicians are in the pocket of corporate interests. We envisioned MC to be constructed of five main domes, connected in the center by a large transportation hub. The domes were the Nestle Dome, the Microsoft Dome, the Monsanto Dome, the Goldman Sachs Dome, and the Exxon Dome. There are remote mining outposts.

Play:

0. Vignette: KP grew up in one of the mega cities of the NWEUFMU (Northwest European United Federation and Monetary Union), privileged and with a brilliant scientist father, who had radical leanings. After a model early career including military service, KP entered first local than national politics but without major office. KPs career and politics led to alienation from his father. Before coming to MC, KP cleaned up a crisis in the Franco-Iberian Province by instituting tough monetary politics, harsh penalties for work evasion, and increasing police presence. These harsh, successful and highly unpopular policies gave him a reputation as a fixer but no chance for elected office; so he angled for the appointment to MC and got it.

1. PERSONAL (Governor): After welcome receptions and cheering crowds, KP is guest to Pres Fletcher (Mars Party) at his house, who tells him that the political system on MC is really a veneer for the true lifeblood of the colony: the corporations whose continued investment is vital. KP responds that he has met with the corporations already; stability of the colony will be incentive for continued funding; it is his plan not just to consult but to execute to turn things around.

2. Progress 1 (KP). KP speaks at a Transport Union gathering after meeting with employers. "We are all in this together, we are all new to Mars but this is our home now; the Colony must thrive, we will put differences aside." Roll: 4/3 - progress! Sydney Fane (beat reporter, Libertarian Party, has anonymous blog) speaks up to ask what KP will do stop the decline in real wages and deterioration of the condition of the workers. KP, emotional, responds that he has always dreamed of making a difference, vows to work for the everyman, will work with corporation---the real movers in MC. Roll 6/1 - failure! Council Member Hadar (Free Mars Party), who is on the podium with KP grabs the mic from him and says that KP can be forgiven the rash expression: of course he will work through the political system, the Council and Mayor's office. KP is publicly embarrassed, and moves a token to contempt; records no HP.

3. Opposition (G). Mayor Elaine Yang brings KP news of a strike among the transportation and sanitation workers. If the strike continues the quarterly budget will not be met.

4. Progress (KP). KP meets with labor union leaders behind closed doors, including the Council liaison to labor, Tanya. Promises to reduce working hours by having the corporate office workers pitch in, if strikes will stop for 90 days. Roll 3/1 - argh. Tanya supports KP, who moves a token to deception and records 4 Lies against the Labor marker. Improvements are 90 days are an empty promise.

5. Opposition (G). Serena Panin, Network Chief (Mars Party) has lunch with KP and tells him that Fane will publish a story about increasing birth defects caused by radiation and how Monsanto has been paying affected families to hush up the issue. She can only delay publication, but not stop it, and urges KP to send a positive signal now---to mitigate the political fallout from the article. A lot of advertising dollars for Network ride on the relationship with Monsanto.

6. Personal (KP). Strategy session with Joe Riddle, KP's advisor (Free Mars Party). KP wants to turn things around. Should Fane disappear? No, that is not how KP wants to operate, wants real, honest progress and ultimately independence for MC. Joe and KP decide that KP will announce new research to fight the radiation issue. [This was an important scene because it took us a while to see a plan, but it felt like it could have gone straight into a progress scene.]

7. Personal (G). KP meets with Fane at a remote mining outpost and offers Fane a deal. Fane agrees to tone down the damaging article, not for the politicians sent by the corporation to screw over the colonists one more time, but for the families who are suffering. [This actually felt like progress, but no dice rolled.]

8. Progress (KP). Closed door meeting with Council to get funding for the radiation research. Roll 5/2 - Progress! The Council sees reason and is willing to support KP by funding research. Roll 4/1 - wrgs! Council member wants to fund research through a public-private partnership with Monsanto. KP refuses. In the end KP makes the announcement before the article hits, and sends for researchers and doctors from Earth (who will take months to arrive), without Council backing for funding. Token to Deception, 12 Lies against Radiation marker.

9. Opposition (G). Joe Riddle gets tipped off that Council Member Tanya is taking money from the corporations to stall strikes, and brings KP proof of secret payments into Tanya's numbered account at a bank in the Semi-Independent Pan-Alpine Republic.

10. Personal (KP). KP, with no immediate crisis at hand, meets his father at remote terraforming research lab. The reunion is humbling for KP who is beginning to come around to his father's radical views of The Man. KP asks for advice on the radiation issue, and Jonas tells him that part of his terraforming efforts have shown that a certain inert gas might shield harmful radiation. The research isn't complete because there has been no funding (and no public acknowledgement of the radiation/birth defect risk).

11. Personal (G). In a one-on-one meeting, KP discovers that rumors about Council Member Tanya's corruption are leaking out. [Or should this have been an opposition scene?]

12. Progress (KP). KP needs money to fund research into the anti-radiation gas. He meets with Coalition President Fletcher and threatens to reveal corruption in the Council... basically blackmail. Roll 6/6 - progress!!! [We did not play with the doubling rule.] Fletcher buckles and promises support but only the Council controls the budget. Roll 2/2 - progress. Fletcher agrees to provide funding from customs/tax revenue to research. 16 HP against radiation marker. [This was the only progress scene which didn't end with a 1 being rolled...]

13. Opposition (G). KP wakes to TV reports of a Transportation Workers' strike; the union foreman accuses the Council of corruption during an interview with anchor Jase Williams, but doesn't name Council Member Tanya.

14. Progress (KP). Joe Riddle arranges meeting with Josephina Fayes, who has been driving a bus in Dome 4 for 40 years and was just kicked out of her apartment. Fane attends. Roll 5/6 - progress! Fane agrees to leak the corruption story. KP makes speech condemning corruption and supporting Fayes election to the Council "a real working woman - one of us!" Roll 1/3 - OMG. Fayes is elected to replace disgraced Member Tanya, but KP learns that Fayes is taking money from Monsanto to "listen to their side of the issue" before Council meetings. Token to Deception. 15 Lies against Corruption. There are now 3 markers in Deception, 1 in Contempt, 5 in Admiration.

15. Opposition (G). [At this point I was struggling to come up with oppositions that made sense and brought in the different markers.] A cave-in in Dome 3 is reported, 20 workers severely injured; some will not make it. The appallingly poor safety standards are revealed and laborers have fled Dome 3, causing overcrowding in the transportation hub and other Domes.

16. Progress (KP): KP meets with Fane again, wearing a wire. Also there are the Mayor, Council Members and Coalition President. Roll 3/2 - progress! KP reveals the payments to Fayes on the Council and gets a commitment to immediate relief for the workers, including addressing the housing problems. Roll 6/2 - progress!! KP talks Coalition President Fletcher into leaning on the corporations to donate mining equipment that will be used for repairs on Dome 3 and munch needed construction of housing. Roll 5/1 - OMFG. Pushing for wage increases for the workers, KP runs into a wall. No go. KP promises wage increases to workers, knowing he cannot keep the promise. Token to Deception (now at 4). 19 Lies against labor marker.

17. Personal (G): KP's father appears drunk at KP's apartment and accuses KP of selling out, not keeping his promises, being The Man. KP is at his wit's end, things are even worse then before - there has to be a way through this!?! Father and son get drunk together and dream of finally bringing around the Revolution. What if security chief Lloyd were gone? KP could fill the power vacuum, seize control of the security forces, topple the Council...

18. Progress (KP). Using slush funds to find a guy who knows a guy who knows a guy who doesn't mind dirty work, KP arranges for Security Chief Lloyd to be shot in the head during a riot sparked by a strike. Roll 1/4 - SCANDAL (there are 4 deception tokens). Failure. Disgrace. Tilt. Move one token to Contempt, as well as the 4 tokens from Deception: there are six tokens in Contempt. KP is removed.

Endgame: (G) Fane has no stomach for political assassination and informs on KP who is arrested in public for Lloyd's murder. Dome 3 collapses during the riots. Food shortage ensues. 2 of the 5 sponsor corporations declare the MC experiment a failure and discontinue funding. The future of the colony is in serious doubt.

Endgame: (KP) KP is disgraced and convicted during a public trial and imprisoned in a make-shift prison in the collapsed tunnel between the hub and collapsed Dome 3. During trial KP, defends himself and screams and rails: "Somebody has to carry on the fight!" and rambles about MC independence. KP's father is banished to an outpost in the asteroid belt.

Some observation.

Of 7 progress scenes, only one did not produce a 1 (IM swears he will bring his own dice next time). Truly a game about failure. The game was tense and the sense of impotence and futility grew steadily. Our Savior started with great credentials and even high (if hidden) ideals and descended rapidly into cynicism. A turning point was the scene when KP exposed corruption in the Council and got a worker elected to replace the corrupt member only find that the worker was already in the corporations' pocket. Corruption continued and all KP could do was lie to the public. It was an exciting game.

The game seemed to transport our agenda through the game, even without our clearly articulating. And even though there is no mechanical connection between the narration in progress scenes and the progress that is made, it feels like there is in the game. KP's player was wringing his hands and really feeling the pressure. "What can I do? Is there anything I can do?"

We felt there were some minor mechanical issues. It was hard for us to really meaningfully distinguish personal from opposition scenes and we felt that if we made scenes interactive so that we both participated, Governor scenes bled into progress scenes. Sometimes we struggled to narrate failure that made sense. In the second half it became more difficult to come up with opposition scenes that felt organic. Despite the structure of switching narrative control, the best scenes were the ones we brainstormed together. The most fun was taking our ideas, pretty much unfiltered and running with them. There were several points were we diverged from the background in the game, most notably when it came to the role of the corporations and the structure of the MC, but we felt comfortable doing so. One particular issue was that the back-and-forth structure meant that either there only one scene or three between progress scenes so that at one point we went progress-opposition-personal-personal-progress. It would have felt more natural to go straight from the first personal into the progress scene but that would have meant 2 consecutive scenes for the Savior. Apart from the scene with the drunk father, personal scenes were hard to tell from opposition scenes, several of which were one-on-one or small meetings.

Fear cards didn't do much for us. Only one of them became really relevant, the others were things we cared about but they never came up. At one point we turned over two fear cards in a row but they didn't help decide on the next scene. Perhaps it was just our fear cards - but I think we could have done well enough without them. In future games, I think I will loosen the scene structure a bit. It broke the spell at times to think about what type of scene do I need now, etc.

Those are niggles though - the game was very powerful in more than one respect. First it was fun to see the fiction emerge jointly and relatively effortlessly. But second, IM and I just connected over the internets when I posted about the game---we had never met before we sat down at a bookstore together to play the game, and neither of us had played the game. Yet the experience was meaningful and enjoyable. That is a powerful social thing because it showed that the games' success did not depend on existing rapport between the players.

Tim - thanks for a great game design!

1. PERSONAL (Governor): After welcome receptions and cheering crowds, Kelly Perkins is guest to Pres Fletcher (Mars Party) at his house, who tells him that the political system on Mars Colony is really a veneer for the true lifeblood of the colony: the corporations whose continued investment is vital. Kelly Perkins responds that he has met with the corporations already; stability of the colony will be incentive for continued funding; it is his plan not just to consult but to execute to turn things around.

2. Progress 1 (Kelly Perkins). Kelly Perkins speaks at a Transport Union gathering after meeting with employers. "We are all in this together, we are all new to Mars but this is our home now; the Colony must thrive, we will put differences aside." Roll: 4/3 - progress! Sydney Fane (beat reporter, Libertarian Party, has anonymous blog) speaks up to ask what Kelly Perkins will do stop the decline in real wages and deterioration of the condition of the workers. Kelly Perkins, emotional, responds that he has always dreamed of making a difference, vows to work for the everyman, will work with corporation---the real movers in Mars Colony. Roll 6/1 - failure! Council Member Hadar (Free Mars Party), who is on the podium with Kelly Perkins grabs the mic from him and says that Kelly Perkins can be forgiven the rash expression: of course he will work through the political system, the Council and Mayor's office. Kelly Perkins is publicly embarrassed, and moves a token to contempt; records no HP.

3. Opposition (Governor). Mayor Elaine Yang brings Kelly Perkins news of a strike among the transportation and sanitation workers. If the strike continues the quarterly budget will not be met.

4. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Kelly Perkins meets with labor union leaders behind closed doors, including the Council liaison to labor, Tanya. Promises to reduce working hours by having the corporate office workers pitch in, if strikes will stop for 90 days. Roll 3/1 - argh. Tanya supports Kelly Perkins, who moves a token to deception and records 4 Lies against the Labor marker. Improvements are 90 days are an empty promise.

5. Opposition (Governor). Serena Panin, Network Chief (Mars Party) has lunch with Kelly Perkins and tells him that Fane will publish a story about increasing birth defects caused by radiation and how Monsanto has been paying affected families to hush up the issue. She can only delay publication, but not stop it, and urges Kelly Perkins to send a positive signal now---to mitigate the political fallout from the article. A lot of advertising dollars for Network ride on the relationship with Monsanto.

6. Personal (Kelly Perkins). Strategy session with Joe Riddle, Kelly Perkins's advisor (Free Mars Party). Kelly Perkins wants to turn things around. Should Fane disappear? No, that is not how Kelly Perkins wants to operate, wants real, honest progress and ultimately independence for Mars Colony. Joe and Kelly Perkins decide that Kelly Perkins will announce new research to fight the radiation issue.

7. Personal (Governor). Kelly Perkins meets with Fane at a remote mining outpost and offers Fane a deal. Fane agrees to tone down the damaging article, not for the politicians sent by the corporation to screw over the colonists one more time, but for the families who are suffering.

8. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Closed door meeting with Council to get funding for the radiation research. Roll 5/2 - Progress! The Council sees reason and is willing to support Kelly Perkins by funding research. Roll 4/1 - wrgs! Council member wants to fund research through a public-private partnership with Monsanto. Kelly Perkins refuses. In the end Kelly Perkins makes the announcement before the article hits, and sends for researchers and doctors from Earth (who will take months to arrive), without Council backing for funding. Token to Deception, 12 Lies against Radiation marker.

9. Opposition (Governor). Joe Riddle gets tipped off that Council Member Tanya is taking money from the corporations to stall strikes, and brings Kelly Perkins proof of secret payments into Tanya's numbered account at a bank in the Semi-Independent Pan-Alpine Republic.

10. Personal (Kelly Perkins). Kelly Perkins, with no immediate crisis at hand, meets his father at remote terraforming research lab. The reunion is humbling for Kelly Perkins who is beginning to come around to his father's radical views of The Man. Kelly Perkins asks for advice on the radiation issue, and Jonas tells him that part of his terraforming efforts have shown that a certain inert gas might shield harmful radiation. The research isn't complete because there has been no funding (and no public acknowledgement of the radiation/birth defect risk).

12. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Kelly Perkins needs money to fund research into the anti-radiation gas. He meets with Coalition President Fletcher and threatens to reveal corruption in the Council... basically blackmail. Roll 6/6 - progress!!! [We did not play with the doubling rule.] Fletcher buckles and promises support but only the Council controls the budget. Roll 2/2 - progress. Fletcher agrees to provide funding from customs/tax revenue to research. 16 HP against radiation marker. [This was the only progress scene which didn't end with a 1 being rolled...]

14. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Joe Riddle arranges meeting with Josephina Fayes, who has been driving a bus in Dome 4 for 40 years and was just kicked out of her apartment. Fane attends. Roll 5/6 - progress! Fane agrees to leak the corruption story. Kelly Perkins makes speech condemning corruption and supporting Fayes election to the Council "a real working woman - one of us!" Roll 1/3 - OMG. Fayes is elected to replace disgraced Member Tanya, but Kelly Perkins learns that Fayes is taking money from Monsanto to "listen to their side of the issue" before Council meetings. Token to Deception. 15 Lies against Corruption. There are now 3 markers in Deception, 1 in Contempt, 5 in Admiration.

15. Opposition (Governor). A cave-in in Dome 3 is reported, 20 workers severely injured; some will not make it. The appallingly poor safety standards are revealed and laborers have fled Dome 3, causing overcrowding in the transportation hub and other Domes.

16. Progress (Kelly Perkins): Kelly Perkins meets with Fane again, wearing a wire. Also there are the Mayor, Council Members and Coalition President. Roll 3/2 - progress! Kelly Perkins reveals the payments to Fayes on the Council and gets a commitment to immediate relief for the workers, including addressing the housing problems. Roll 6/2 - progress!! Kelly Perkins talks Coalition President Fletcher into leaning on the corporations to donate mining equipment that will be used for repairs on Dome 3 and munch needed construction of housing. Roll 5/1 - OMFG. Pushing for wage increases for the workers, Kelly Perkins runs into a wall. No go. Kelly Perkins promises wage increases to workers, knowing he cannot keep the promise. Token to Deception (now at 4). 19 Lies against labor marker.

17. Personal (Governor): Kelly Perkins's father appears drunk at Kelly Perkins's apartment and accuses Kelly Perkins of selling out, not keeping his promises, being The Man. Kelly Perkins is at his wit's end, things are even worse then before - there has to be a way through this!?! Father and son get drunk together and dream of finally bringing around the Revolution. What if security chief Lloyd were gone? Kelly Perkins could fill the power vacuum, seize control of the security forces, topple the Council...

18. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Using slush funds to find a guy who knows a guy who knows a guy who doesn't mind dirty work, Kelly Perkins arranges for Security Chief Lloyd to be shot in the head during a riot sparked by a strike. Roll 1/4 - SCANDAL (there are 4 deception tokens). Failure. Disgrace. Tilt. Move one token to Contempt, as well as the 4 tokens from Deception: there are six tokens in Contempt. Kelly Perkins is removed.

Endgame: (Governor) Fane has no stomach for political assassination and informs on Kelly Perkins who is arrested in public for Lloyd's murder. Dome 3 collapses during the riots. Food shortage ensues. 2 of the 5 sponsor corporations declare the Mars Colony experiment a failure and discontinue funding. The future of the colony is in serious doubt.

Endgame: (Kelly Perkins) Kelly Perkins is disgraced and convicted during a public trial and imprisoned in a make-shift prison in the collapsed tunnel between the hub and collapsed Dome 3. During trial Kelly Perkins, defends himself and screams and rails: "Somebody has to carry on the fight!" and rambles about Mars Colony independence. Kelly Perkins's father is banished to an outpost in the asteroid belt.

Some of my thoughts about the structure.

At first I was apprehensive about the length of the rules ahead of time, but it turned out to be really natural once we got into it.  (Minor nitpic, but perhaps some typography improvements on the rules can be made - make the "required rules" stuff stand out more, and break out all the more descriptive things visually into optional boxes.)

There were two things.

One - the order of the scenes, Bloomfield already covered.  The restriction on strictly alternating Governor-Savior scenes got in the way a couple of times.  We resolved it by changing the rules - most of our Personal scenes were really Progress scenes in disguise (or brainstorm/preparation for progress scenes).

The other one, for me as Kelly, I really found the all-or-nothing Failure mechanic was a little weird at times.  Don't get me wrong, I think the "push your luck" idea is awesome!  It definitely adds lots of pressure, realism and desperation.

However, what happened is I actually wanted to make progress and fix the issues (not just improve my reputation).  So to avoid no progress being made at all, I have to choose Deception, because I felt like at least something was being done, though it wasn't all true.

But the game models by putting all the progress under "Lies", even if some real progress was made.

So when the inevitable Scandal comes, I would have liked at least some of the progress would stay rather than being totally wiped away.  This would have preserved at least some of my legacy, even despite the mistakes.

Though I guess that's just part of the design, and part of the reality of being a politician.  Perhaps it is even correct - any mis-step you make as a politician wipes out 10 times as much progress you might have made before.

The things that worked great?  We managed to work together to create a lot of the scenes and co-narrate some of them to great effect.  At times I was at a loss for what to do, and really desperate, and we used some of the NPCs to bounce ideas off each-other and come up with the next steps.

The thing that amazed me was the feeling of actual responsibility that the game produced.  Conditions deteriorated rapidly and people confronted me with real problems that I could not solve.  I made promises hoping to make good on them, while getting increasingly desperate and feeling like a lying scumbag.

It was really fun.  Thanks - Tim for a great design and Bloomfield for a great session.

Final comment.  Tim, in your notes on the site, I saw that you moved the "Fear Card" stage to be first.  Though most of the cards didn't apply to our game, the one that did apply (corporate interests and corruption) really carried the game in a way.  So I think it was a great decision to move it to the beginning of the setup - it worked for us.

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Just thinking of how to help people come up with Fear Cards that are more relevant.  Our cards were poignant for our US government, but monetary policy and religion didn't seem to fit that strongly with the Mars fiction.

One thing that might help maybe is to encourage the fear cards to be a little more based around the game's world?  Perhaps one fear card for each branch of government (of which we have 4 in the US - execute, legislative, judicial and mass-informational)?

Maybe just encourage more discussion during the Fear Card stage?  Some way how the fears apply to the Colony and some of the major problems that are happening there?  I guess that's already covered the Health Marker stage.
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Kelly got removed!  This is the first I've heard of a forced removal in the wild. And what an utterly grim story. I've gotten great satisfaction in comparing your session to Gregor's recent game in which Kelly couldn't roll anything but successes.  Yours and Gregor's games are two completely opposite experiences, and both seemed to work.  I'm happy that the the game can handle the extremes, but, just to be clear, this was pretty extreme.

I have a few rules clarifications and comments to make, specifically with the way you handled personal and opposition scenes.  I'll be putting together a longer post tomorrow, but, for now, I'm off to bed.

iluxan wrote:

14. Progress (Kelly Perkins). Joe Riddle arranges meeting with Josephina Fayes, who has been driving a bus in Dome 4 for 40 years and was just kicked out of her apartment. Fane attends. Roll 5/6 - progress! Fane agrees to leak the corruption story. Kelly Perkins makes speech condemning corruption and supporting Fayes election to the Council "a real working woman - one of us!" Roll 1/3 - OMG. Fayes is elected to replace disgraced Member Tanya, but Kelly Perkins learns that Fayes is taking money from Monsanto to "listen to their side of the issue" before Council meetings. Token to Deception. 15 Lies against Corruption. There are now 3 markers in Deception, 1 in Contempt, 5 in Admiration.

Kelly, increasingly desperate to make progress, throws caution to the wind and makes a desperate gamble.  Throws himself with the everywoman and the underground blogger against the Man.  And it pays off - Tanya is off the Council and Josephina is elected.  But it's all for naught.

[I have to say, inventing Josephina was fun.  Though she didn't end up a huge character, we had a great time creating her together.  Also, wit hso many failed rolls, at this point I didn't expect my tenure to end in anything but disaster.  But at the same time, I felt strangely compelled to keep using Deceptions to make progress, because I genuinely wanted to make some progressin improving the Colony, and if all I got were failures, I wanted at least something to happen.]

17. Personal (Governor): Kelly Perkins's father appears drunk at Kelly Perkins's apartment and accuses Kelly Perkins of selling out, not keeping his promises, being The Man. Kelly Perkins is at his wit's end, things are even worse then before - there has to be a way through this!?! Father and son get drunk together and dream of finally bringing around the Revolution. What if security chief Lloyd were gone? Kelly Perkins could fill the power vacuum, seize control of the security forces, topple the Council...

[One of my favorite scenes.  Completely desperate, with no way to catch up or fix all the things that happened, I started rambling, and Bloomfield played along great.  At this point both I, and Kelly, are basically incoherent and raving mad.  This is what Mars does to you, people.]

Bloomfield & iluxan:

I thought I’d start with a few rules clarifications.

First, and I almost hate to tell you this, but things probably should have been a bit worse than they actually were.  When you roll a 1, you do not count that roll towards any Lie Points if you choose to create a Deception (see page 34).  Only the good rolls generate points for you.  This means that in Scene 4, for example, you should have generated 0 points.  In Scene 8, you should have generated only 7 points.  All things considered, I don’t think this would have made a difference in your game because failure came up so often.  But in a more “average” game, the extra points do make a difference.

If the prospect of generating 0 points annoys you, I suggest using the “Best Intentions” variations detailed on the website.  That would mean you ignore any failure (except double 1s) on the first roll of a progress scene.  It can soften the blow a bit.

Second, you guys played it a bit fast and loose with the Personal Scenes.  For the most part, this is just a classification issue.  No big deal.  But for example, your very first scene after the vignette was really an Opposition Scene.  Same goes for everything except maybe Scene 10 and Scene 17 (what a great scene by the way).  Remember that Personal Scenes do not directly involve colony politics or any opposition for Kelly (see page 21).  They are really a chance to see Kelly in a non-professional setting, interacting with people just as people.  Again, from reading your account, you didn’t do anything wrong.  You just called a few Opposition Scenes Personal Scenes.  On the other hand, maybe a better handle on this distinction would have helped you to frame more natural Opposition Scenes?

Otherwise, it looks like you have all the rules down.

I also wanted to respond briefly to the following:

iluxan wrote: At first I was apprehensive about the length of the rules ahead of time, but it turned out to be really natural once we got into it.  (Minor nitpic, but perhaps some typography improvements on the rules can be made - make the "required rules" stuff stand out more, and break out all the more descriptive things visually into optional boxes.)

I know this is a story game, so the story is the main thing.  So all the text in the rulebook that deals with the setting and story is just as important, if not more important, than the so-called "rules".

However, you there are always times when you need to find a specific rule quickly right before/during a game.  (Even though  I read the rules cover-to-cover ahead of time, obviously.)  I also realize after re-reading more just now that you were going for a conversational flow rather than a power-point presentation with bullets for each rule.

I only have two places where I noticed some of the actual rules were a bit hard to find, and could benefit from a bit of separation from the rest of the text.

* Stage 3 - Would help to separate descriptions from the rule.  If nothing else I'd highlight the words "chooses one character from each of the four major Organizations".  (I almost got that wrong, I thought ALL characters had to have a party at the beginning, which would've been really overwhelming.)
* Part E (Failure) - "If there are ever five tokens in Contempt".  This is the other place I actually had to hunt down a rule during play that was harder than it should be.  (All it needs is to highlight the word "five" or otherwise highlight that sentence from the rest.)

One more thing I found (slightly) confusing:
* The word "Guide" for political parties.  I guess you suggest that to mean "name of similar political party".  For us we chose actual names for the parties ("Free Mars", "Mars Party", etc).  So the "Guide" could be better called "description" or "characteristics" or something.  Again, minor choice-of-word thing.  (And I'd personally add a "Name" field and encourage players to get creative with them.  Clever silly party names are always easier to remember than "Yellow" and "Green".  The colors should stay too, though.)

Finally the Deception rule that we got wrong - that you only add the sum of the rolls before the 1 role.  As far as I can see that particular rule is only in the "Example" in the Deception section.  (Well, it does say "if he hadn’t rolled a 1", but I guess I didn't interpret it quite right.  Maybe better "if he stopped before rolling a 1"?)

All of these are very minor quibbles.  But you did ask.  :)

It was a fun game!  Now I'm looking for something simple and inspiring (and non-fantasy) to try with my mostly-non-gamer friends - http://story-games.com/forums/comments.php?DiscussionID=13332

And looking wistfully at S/Lay w/Me as a tripping and alluring thing I could maybe one day play with my wife, though I think I've got a long way to go.

Tim wrote:
Second, you guys played it a bit fast and loose with the Personal Scenes.  For the most part, this is just a classification issue.  No big deal.  But for example, your very first scene after the vignette was really an Opposition Scene.  Same goes for everything except maybe Scene 10 and Scene 17 (what a great scene by the way).  Remember that Personal Scenes do not directly involve colony politics or any opposition for Kelly (see page 21).  They are really a chance to see Kelly in a non-professional setting, interacting with people just as people.  Again, from reading your account, you didn’t do anything wrong.  You just called a few Opposition Scenes Personal Scenes.  On the other hand, maybe a better handle on this distinction would have helped you to frame more natural Opposition Scenes?

iluxan,

I see now what you mean about the rules, and using them as a reference during play.  You're right, the rules were written in more conversational style (rather than a reference style). But point well taken.  Thank you.

iluxan wrote: One more thing I found (slightly) confusing:
* The word "Guide" for political parties.  I guess you suggest that to mean "name of similar political party".  For us we chose actual names for the parties ("Free Mars", "Mars Party", etc).  So the "Guide" could be better called "description" or "characteristics" or something.  Again, minor choice-of-word thing.  (And I'd personally add a "Name" field and encourage players to get creative with them.  Clever silly party names are always easier to remember than "Yellow" and "Green".  The colors should stay too, though.)

Finally the Deception rule that we got wrong - that you only add the sum of the rolls before the 1 role.  As far as I can see that particular rule is only in the "Example" in the Deception section.  (Well, it does say "if he hadn’t rolled a 1", but I guess I didn't interpret it quite right.  Maybe better "if he stopped before rolling a 1"?)

Tim wrote:
I don't want to beat a dead horse, but just for the sake of anyone else reading along, I was referring to the sentence that reads, "The Savior gains no points from the roll that actually included the 1."  Perhaps that could be a bit clearer though.

So I completely missed the "or" in this sentence about Opposition Scenes: "An Opposition Scene must involve Colony politics or the lead-up to a direct threat against Colony stability." I thought every opposition scene had to directly lead to a threat against Colony stability by setting up a progress scene. (The rules do say that every opposition scene is followed by a Progress scene, as soon as Kelly starts to take action during an Opposition scene.) That was my only struggle with Opposition scenes during Kelly's spectacularly bad run of luck: I thought I had to keep pouring it on setting up a new direct threat in each opposition scene (but the only one that felt a bit forced was the collapse of Dome 3, although that proved very thematic and fruitful for Kelly's descent into mad failure. I might have just stuck with Colony policy and deepened existing threats. Question: can the Savior go into a Progress scene after a Personal scene, or may Progress scenes only follow Opposition scenes?

Thanks for the clarification - although we didn't let it get in our way and the misunderstandings didn't detract from the game.

I like the suggestion to highlight certain key rules (like I originally missed when additional fear cards get revealed). And I really appreciated the brevity of the rules. Still, I think brief examples of scenes would be great.

Another variant to consider for the "this game is too damn hard" document: Use d8 instead of d6, leave everything else the same. :)

Bloomfield wrote: (The rules do say that every opposition scene is followed by a Progress scene, as soon as Kelly starts to take action during an Opposition scene.) That was my only struggle with Opposition scenes during Kelly's spectacularly bad run of luck: I thought I had to keep pouring it on setting up a new direct threat in each opposition scene...

Opposition Scenes only set the stage for Kelly to take action. As soon as the Savior begins to narrate what Kelly is doing to solve a Colony problem, the Opposition Scene should end and a Progress Scene should begin.

Question: can the Savior go into a Progress scene after a Personal scene, or may Progress scenes only follow Opposition scenes?

iluxan wrote:
Out of curiosity, are you planning on potentially revising/augmenting Mars Colony?  Actively working on any other projects currently?