The iSystem Games Thread

[reptile2k1]

I did it! After five hours of work (not including the stuff I had to do in order to get a new word-processing program and a pdf-writer) I completed the first "non-Jared" iSystem game of the world! Woooo-hoooo!!!

;)

And so far I only violated a single issue: it is generic... hehehehe...

But now seriously:
As a native German my English is far from perfect! Therefore I need some people who volunteer as proof-readers!

Don't be afraid! It is only one (1!!!) single (1!!!) page!.

Unfortunately my university web server is down (or more accurately: The server is standing in my roommates room for upgrading for three solid months now, because he is the sysop, and a lazy one too!) and I have no chance to put the pdf on the web...

But if you are interested simply mail me (use the button below) or send a PM.

Thx,

reptile

[reptile2k1]

"I've got to say that it hurts!"
- Nitzer Ebb, Getting Closer

I am great... brilliant... a genius...
30 minutes after I finished "Quick and Dirty", the iSystem game, I deleted the original sxw-files while cleaning my harddisk... Now I have to type it all over again... I am never going to get sleep...  :(.
Thank heavens I did not delete the pdf as well...

[reptile2k1]

Hi folks!

Jared gave me some input on my first "game" which I incorporated in a second "game".

Interested? Mail me!

[reptile2k1]

Shabby Homepage Online

... and believe me, it definetely is shabby!

//members.aol.com/SchlaghundV3

There you can find the stuff I have written so far!

[reptile2k1]

That shabby homepage is not that shabby anymore... so if anyone is interested, visit and send comments!

//members.aol.com/SchlaghundV3

[Bailey]

Just what is iSystem?  I didn't see a link off your main page.

[Andrew Martin]

Just what is iSystem?  I didn't see a link off your main page.

It's at the bottom, here: http://memento-mori.com/inspectres/downloads.html.

[Balbinus]

Under the heading Professions (only 1 allowed) in the first line the word "characters" should have an apostrophe before the s.

Under the header Negative Traits, the text should read "Negative traits are those which can sometimes be a hindrance."

under the header Health, in the fifth line, the word "cumulated" should be replaced with the word "accumulated".  Also, the words "of that sort" should be replaced with the words "of the relevant type".

Under the header Prerequisites, in the fourth line, the word "proper" should be replaced with the word "relevant".

Your English is excellent, this barely needed proofing.

Best,

Max

[reptile2k1]

Hi folks!

@ Bailey: The iSystem thingie is hidden in the InSpectres DL area... since I guess it will get its own place sometime I did not insert a direct link, but a link to M-M-T in general!

@ Balbinus: Thanks for your help... but in which game shall I make the corrections? QnD, Insert Title or Ctrl+Alt+Del?

@ all: After some correspondence I have come to accept the fact that my "games" are not very "iSystemish" (for several reasons). I hope you guys like them nontheless!

I will make a "correction run" in a few days and fix all glitches and misspellings!

Thanks for your support!

[Jared A. Sorensen]

And with that, I'm closing this topic.