Dust Devils Box Copy Idea

[b_bankhead]

Over in the publishing section we are running an exercise, 'what kind of copy should you put on a boxed set of Dust Devils in an ordinary (Non gamer) store that would make non-gamers buy it.  I have tossed my hat into the ring here:
http://www.indie-rpgs.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=41985#41985

 I would welcome critiques as well as more entries to see whats on you hombre's minds regarding this issue

[Matt Snyder]

Over in the publishing section we are running an exercise, 'what kind of copy should you put on a boxed set of Dust Devils in an ordinary (Non gamer) store that would make non-gamers buy it.  I have tossed my hat into the ring here:
http://www.indie-rpgs.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=41985#41985

 I would welcome critiques as well as more entries to see whats on you hombre's minds regarding this issue

Bryan, I have been reading with curiosity that thread and several others related to the "Fantastic Five" Ron's working on introducing for discussion.

I appreciate your take on the copy -- it actually gave me some ideas.

I'm not sure what to say about all this yet. I'm not seeing the whole picture, yet, and I'm waiting for Ron to unveil more of his ideas.