[Levity]: New free system, need a review for translation

[rgrassi]

Hi all. I'm Roberto from Italy.
I've just published an italian PDF version of my free rpg system specifically built for kids, new to Gdr and Gdr casual players.
http://www.robertograssi.net/meyroan/rpg/levity.zip
It emphasizes on narration and simple rules with some 'new' and interesting "narration" modes to allow the master to conduct an interesting session.
I'd like to translate it in english and let it know to you all.
I'll do this task but i realy need one-two of you to revise it in order to find mistakes, typos and so on...
Is there someone interested?
TIA,
Rob

[Kesher]

Howdy, Roberto.

I downloaded the pdf, and though I speak no Italian, my English is good enough to pull out some Latinate meaning from it.

It looks interesting, & with a five-and-a-half month old son, I've been thinking alot lately about gaming for kids.

I'd love to help you edit your translation; you can send the manuscript to:  akesher@mn.rr.com

The more specifics you can give me about what kind of feedback you want, the better, of course!

[rgrassi]

The more specifics you can give me about what kind of feedback you want, the better, of course!

Ok, thank you very much.
When i'll finish my translation (plan before 9 of August) i'll let you know. :)
Cheers,
Rob