[Legends of Yesteryear] Opinions?

[Dregg]

In taking a break from the design of the new Pulp Era RPG, I have played around with some design ideas for a game based on the characters legend more than the standard pulp games I see on the market today.
in design goal I want a narritive system that will be more of a challenge to the characters Legend than any skills or feats/etc.
Not to sure if this will be something i might do as a side project or just something to try and sharpen my design skills, but I thought i would get some opinions of the Forge before I go further.

I posted these rules ideas to my blogger account
http://pulplegends.blogspot.com/
It reads from the bottom up, so i appologize

thanks in advance