SUPER GREEN!

[JSDiamond]

Inspired by Ruby Rod.

Check it out on the 'Other Projects' page.  In pdf.

http://www.orbit-rpg.com

[Daniel Solis]

Right off, this is a fantastic, fun idea for a game. Having skimmed the PDF, your logic for the system seems pretty well thought out, for my tastes at least. I love the paparazzi results.

But what specific questions do you have?

[JSDiamond]

Oops.

Just, does it flow?  Does it feel right?  Is it missing anything?  Does the system have enough strategy to it?  Does it work for its intended goal to be a tongue-in-cheek collaborative PvP game?

[Spooky Fanboy]

Where the heck *is* the Other Projects page? I cannot seem to find it and am convinced I'm losing my sight and/or my mind!

[Andrew Martin]

Where the heck *is* the Other Projects page? I cannot seem to find it and am convinced I'm losing my sight and/or my mind!

Here's a direct link to the "Other Projects" page:

http://www.orbit-rpg.com/Rhine.html
(Obviously, this needs refactoring...)

Here's a direct link to the PDF:

http://www.orbit-rpg.com/SUPERGREEN.pdf

[Andrew Martin]

Oops.

Just, does it flow?  Does it feel right?  Is it missing anything?  Does the system have enough strategy to it?  Does it work for its intended goal to be a tongue-in-cheek collaborative PvP game?

#10 on the Paparazzi chart is Over The Top, I feel. I think it would be best to tone it down by removing the swear words and "soccer". :)

[Daniel Solis]

I concur. Try thinking of how Ruby Rod would insult someone, "No fire! No energy! No nothing!"

I don't think there was a single swear word in Fifth Element, actually. Huh. Never noticed that.

[JSDiamond]

You guys are right,  I should tone it down a bit.  I started thinking of all the lamest things and I think I lit on fire at child pageants (absolutely vile).  However, come Monday I'll make those changes.

[JSDiamond]

Got it.  Edited out the curse words.  Much better now from a flavor standoint and friendlier for playing [since 99% of it is narrative].