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10/23/2005 Ron Edwards: [Left Coast] Ronnies feedback
Hello, Well, as announced, this game has won a $25 Ronny for October. From my notes: Oh god, talk about the 70s!! I'm getting Synanon flashbacks. The subject matter works…
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Participants: Ron Edwards, hix, talysman, Graham Walmsley.

10/23/2005 Cyrus Marriner: [Adrift] Going beyond "Parlor Narration"
This is about my Ronnies entry, Adrift, which can be found at http://www.spacklecube.com/press/adrift.pdf. In the results, my entry was one of the ones categorized as Parlor Narration.  From the …
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Participants: Cyrus Marriner, Graham Walmsley, Ron Edwards, greyorm, Noon, Gregor Hutton.

10/23/2005 Melciber: [Visions of Gaslight] I Cast Magic Missle!
While working on material for VoG I noticed that Thaumaturgy was beginning to move too close to center stage, and this simply would not do. While the game is meant…
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Participants: Melciber, Shreyas Sampat, Jack Aidley.

10/22/2005 daMoose_Neo: [Imp Game] Traps & Mishaps, Adventurers, Monsters & more
Still plodding along! Traps & Mishaps, a companion to my earlier released Mischief & Mayhem, is taking pretty solid shape right now and I have enough pieces of the puzzle…
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Participants: daMoose_Neo.

10/22/2005 shehee: Resolution Mechanic Questions
Searches haven't helped me, so I'm posting. I'm a beginner, be kind. I want a simple dice system for a resolution mechanic. I played with some friends the other day…
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Participants: shehee, TonyLB, demiurgeastaroth, Matthew Chan, Rob Carriere.

10/21/2005 Sean: [Class/Level Fantasy Game] Player-Driven Adventure & Campaign Mechanics
I've posted some mechanics which are both for a system I'm working on and system-portable to various popular class/level fantasy games here: http://1.myfreebulletinboard.com/calithena-about21.html I would be interested in people's feedback…
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Participants: Sean.

10/21/2005 Chris Geisel: [HPL inspired] Core Concepts, call for Mechanics/Reading
Inspired by Drifting to R'lyeh, Bryan B's design notes, Cthulhu's Clues and Hot Lead & Hypocrisy. Also Burn Sanity and thoughts about the genre for the idea of Sanity as…
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Participants: Chris Geisel, Darcy Burgess, Halzebier.

10/21/2005 JSDiamond: Debris: A Guide to the city of Ruin --setting info for All's quiet...
Here is a draft for the setting info for the All's quiet... thieving rpg.  Although it is setting material (flavor text, etc.) there are also guidelines for role-playing in this…
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Participants: JSDiamond, mutex.

10/21/2005 Gregor Hutton: [Space Rangers] Unofficial Feedback
Well, I had a flight to London and back today which gave me plenty of time to read and make comments on Space Rangers. So, here we go... Introductory fiction,…
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Participants: Gregor Hutton, CSBone, Wolfen.

10/20/2005 EllePepper: Creating a new Tabletop RPG...
I need to understand the basic mechanics behind the dice and points systems.  I have played before, but I'm still not sure where to begin.  I have the original idea…
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Participants: EllePepper, talysman, Blankshield, mutex, Sydney Freedberg, Noon, Selene Tan, Everspinner, daMoose_Neo.

10/20/2005 Malcolm: [Cold City] - Introduction & Character Creation
One of the things I'm currently working on is a small game entitled 'Cold City'. In this post, I've included a very brief introduction to give a feel for what…
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Participants: Malcolm, jasonm, Graham Walmsley, Frank T, PrzeSzkoda, mutex.

10/20/2005 Roger: [3:16] Roger's Analysis and Review
3:16 By Gregor Hutton 16 pages, pdf. I've divided this into two parts.  The first is an analysis of the design of the game.  The second is a review of…
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Participants: Roger, Troy_Costisick, greyorm, Sydney Freedberg, Gregor Hutton, CSBone, Dumirik.

10/20/2005 Negilent: [Source Code]Structured story quandry
I need some feedback on a little issue with the game I am designing, now called Source Code (hoping that no one used this yet, finding a name is…
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Participants: Negilent, Shreyas Sampat, Troy_Costisick, Roger.

10/19/2005 Roger: [Contenders] Roger's Analysis and Review
Contenders By Joe J. Prince 16 pages, pdf. I've divided this into two parts.  The first is an analysis of the design of the game.  The second is a review…
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Participants: Roger, Dantai.

10/18/2005 Smithy: [Today] Conceptual Realignment
[url=http://www.1km1kt.net/rpg/Today.php][i]Today[/i][/url] fell into Ron's "Parlor Narration" category in the October Ronnies, about which Ron said the following: [quote author=Ron Edwards link=topic=17287.msg183003#msg183003 date=1129653501] PARLOR NARRATION These games raise an interesting issue.…
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Participants: Smithy, Matt Snyder, Graham Walmsley, Ron Edwards.

10/18/2005 Graham Walmsley: [Cosmos] Unofficial Ronnies feedback
Since I got feedback on my game, I wanted to pass the favour on. So here's some quick feedback on Owen Anderson's Cosmos, which was one of my personal favourites.…
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Participants: Graham Walmsley, resistor, Ron Edwards.

10/18/2005 JSDiamond: All's quiet... excerpt of player stance
Here is an excerpt from the main rules about understanding the character's relationship to the setting and system. http://www.orbit-rpg.com/alls_key.pdf I hope this clarifies the Player's role better. 
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Participants: JSDiamond, Noon, mutex, EllePepper.

10/17/2005 Jasper: [Geomancer] Conflict Resolution as Negotiation
I first posted about Geomancer in this thread. Now I'm doing a major rework of the conflict resolution system, so that's what this thread is about. First a recap of…
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Participants: Jasper, Vaxalon, SPDuke, Bill Masek, Nogusielkt, TonyLB, Everspinner, Shreyas Sampat, Ben Lehman.

10/15/2005 heironymous: Seven Leagues (a fantasy RPG of Faerie) reawakens (split)
so after a long hiatus (part but not all of which was spent in a private group) i think i'm ready to move forward. the latest (or close to the…
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Participants: heironymous, Technocrat13, Ron Edwards, Green, Bill Masek.

10/15/2005 Matt Wilson: [Reality Cops] Ronnies Feedback, the unauthorized version
Actually, dangit, Ron totally authorized it, so instead you just have to pretend it's the feedback "they" didn't want you to see. Anyway, previously today I wrote up a monster…
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Participants: Matt Wilson, Blankshield, Spooky Fanboy, Ron Edwards.

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10/24/2005 Ron Edwards: [3:16] Ronnies feedback
Hello, This one gets a full Ronny. I'm taking a very different approach from Roger's Roger's analysis and review thread, although it's a fine discussion. My take is emphatically…
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Participants: Ron Edwards, Frank T, Ben Lehman, Gregor Hutton.

10/24/2005 Ron Edwards: [Cycle] Ronnies feedback
Hello, Hooray, a Mortal Kombat game! It's pretty strong for only four pages. Player-character creation is very neat, even exciting, with its colors. I really like the variety available in…
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Participants: Ron Edwards.

10/24/2005 e1ven: [Usus] System Design
Good Morning, I'm working on a system that I can use for two or more settings, both a Western-style game, as well as a Gritty city, Sin-City style. In working…
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Participants: e1ven.

10/24/2005 Arturo G.: [Hierarchy] Splitting the SIS for a large group of players
Hi there! I want to express a couple of thought about Hierarchy. One of the October Ronnies entries. The game is designed for a large group of people (8-15 players).…
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Participants: Arturo G., Troy_Costisick, Ben Lehman, Blankshield, Ron Edwards.

10/24/2005 Ron Edwards: [Sphear] Ronnies feedback
Hello, I'll say it again. Jared was robbed, or very nearly robbed, of a Ronny. Even if the game wasn't as good as it is, there's his blatant and accurate…
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Participants: Ron Edwards, Jared A. Sorensen.

10/25/2005 nikola: [Shock:] Request for feedback
Shock: Social Science Fiction has just gotten to its coming out party at the tender age of 0.1.0. You can download it here</a>. I should very much like feedback on…
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Participants: nikola, TonyLB, CSBone, Graham Walmsley, Paka, Everspinner, Jonathan Hastings, Spooky Fanboy, Negilent, Tim Alexander.

10/25/2005 Dumirik: [The Inquisition] Not fruitful, just wierd.
This thread is directly related to the discussion currently going on at Lumpley's pad here: http://www.lumpley.com/comment.php?entry=119 Also, for newcomers, you will want to check out the previous thread related to…
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Participants: Dumirik, knicknevin, Joshua BishopRoby, Noon.

10/25/2005 Shreyas Sampat: Mere Sapnon ki Rani: Conflict System Queries
I talked about this game some time ago on my blog. I'm trying to work out the way that its conflict procedure works. The system proceeds like this: (I like…
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Participants: Shreyas Sampat, Tim Alexander, jasonm, Bill Masek.

10/25/2005 Jack Aidley: [Chanter] Rules for the things that matter
Lately I've returned to Chanter and been working on turning it into a complete and finished game. To be honest, when I first wrote the game I didn't really think…
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Participants: Jack Aidley, Darcy Burgess, Bankuei, Bill Masek.

10/25/2005 Palaskar: [SIgnature 8.0] Need playtest groups(s)
Hi there, my name is Michael Mendoza, and I'm another one of those starry-eyed game designers fulfilling his dream of creating an RPG. In this case, it's "Signature" a rules-light…
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Participants: Palaskar, Adam Dray, Spooky Fanboy, darrick.

10/26/2005 JSDiamond: All's quiet... final draft for core rules
With help from everyone who posted comments, here is what I hope will be the final draft. http://www.orbit-rpg.com/Alls_Quiet_rules.pdf Changes made to: Modifier values Number of mods Character and Player relationship…
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Participants: JSDiamond.

10/27/2005 Justin Marx: [7W] Player-GM negotiation without slowing play
Hi, I've posted once or twice about this here game I'm writing called Seven Worlds (I know the name is similar to other games, long story...) and essentially the gameplay…
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Participants: Justin Marx, Mark Johnson, Bill Masek, Noon.

10/27/2005 jeremycoatney: Who has actually finished a pen and paper RPG?
-Hello,     I was just wondering how many people have actually written their own pen and paper RPG game, from the ground up-system and all? I was just wondering…
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Participants: jeremycoatney, Eero Tuovinen, timfire, Jared A. Sorensen, Ron Edwards.

10/28/2005 greyorm: [eXpendables] Ronnies Entry Examination
I've been looking over my submission and am having some second thoughts about a number of system features, plus finding all sorts of misteaakes. The most glaring one to me…
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Participants: greyorm, Ron Edwards.

10/29/2005 1of3: [Spheres] First presentation and question
Hi. I've been tossing around some ideas for an RPG with the working title "Spheres". Theme: The game will be on the hand about discovery and war in frontier places,…
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Participants: 1of3, knicknevin.

10/29/2005 EllePepper: [Mistic Mystic] Premise and description.
Keeper Chronicle:  Seaview. Seaview was once a beautiful town, filled with people called Mistics, things out of legend and, in some cases nightmare.  These beings had taken the name Mistic,…
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Participants: EllePepper, Jasper, WhiteRat, daMoose_Neo.

10/29/2005 CSBone: [Space Ranger RPG V0.1] Starting again from scratch.
Space Ranger RPG V0.1 The goal of this thread is to get feedback, design suggestions and criticism for Space Ranger. My personal goal is to make this a solid sci-fi…
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Participants: CSBone, Ron Edwards, JakeVanDam, Gregor Hutton.

11/1/2005 Technocrat13: [Shamble and Moan] I accidentally wrote a 24hr zombie game.
While I was working the other day I had a game idea jump from my noggin right to paper in no time flat.  It's inspired both by 80's zombie flicks…
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Participants: Technocrat13, jasonm, Darcy Burgess, majcher, Dumirik.

11/1/2005 daMoose_Neo: [Genetisys] Monster battling, getting the basics down
Interestingly I seem to have an easier time pulling things together when I ramble here a bit and get some "What exactly are you on?" responses, and I have a…
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Participants: daMoose_Neo, mutex.

11/2/2005 Ron Edwards: [Red Rain] Ronnies feedback
Hello, All right, let's get this out in the open. "Why doesn't Red Rain get a Ronny? Contenders did." Here's the answer: because Contenders as written is a playable boxing…
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Participants: Ron Edwards, Matt Snyder.

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